Changeset 1391 for trunk

Timestamp:

05/28/19 15:21:57 (5 years ago)

Author:

bln4

Message:

Formatting and syntax corrections on feedback to user.

File:

• trunk/src/org/expeditee/auth/account/Contacts.java (modified) (4 diffs)

trunk/src/org/expeditee/auth/account/Contacts.java

@@ -23 +23 @@
                 Path resourcesUsernamePath = Paths.get(FrameIO.PARENT_FOLDER).resolve("resources-" + username);
                 if (resourcesUsernamePath.toFile().exists()) {
-                        sb.append("Detected the presence of the user " + username + " present in your Expeditee file system.  Contact details automatically distributed.");
+                        sb.append("Detected the presence of the user " + username + " in your Expeditee file system.  Contact details automatically distributed.");
                         Path credentialsDirectoryToSharePath = profilePath.resolve(me + "-credentials");
                         Path partnerContactsDirectory = resourcesUsernamePath.resolve("contacts");
@@ -36 +36 @@
                 try {
                         Desktop.getDesktop().open(profilePath.toFile());
-                        sb.append("1. We have opened your profile directory for you.  Tab to it and right click on the " + me + "-credentials directory." + nl);
+                        sb.append("We have opened your profile directory for you.");
+                        sb.append("1. Tab to it (if not visible) and right click on the " + me + "-credentials directory." + nl);
                 } catch (IOException e) {
                         sb.append("1. Open your profile directory (" + profilePath + ") and right click on the " + me + "-credentials directory." + nl);
@@ -42 +43 @@
                 
                 sb.append("2. Click on 'Share with Google Drive'." + nl);
-                sb.append("3. Enter " + username + "'s in the text box." + nl);
+                sb.append("3. Enter " + username + "'s email in the text box." + nl);
                 sb.append("4. Click on the button to the right of the text box in order to set the share to 'View Only'." + nl);
                 sb.append("5. Optionally add a note for " + username + " to read.  Click the send button.");
@@ -57 +58 @@
                         URI driveSharedWithMeURL = new URL(driveSharedWithMeString).toURI();
                         Desktop.getDesktop().browse(driveSharedWithMeURL);
-                        sb.append("1. We have opened Google Drive to the 'Shared With Me' page in your browser.  Right click on " + username + "-credentials and click on 'Add To My Drive'." + nl);
+                        sb.append("We have opened Google Drive to the 'Shared With Me' page in your browser.");
+                        sb.append("1. Right click on " + username + "-credentials and click on 'Add To My Drive'." + nl);
                 } catch (IOException | URISyntaxException e) {
                         sb.append("1. Open your web browser to " + driveSharedWithMeString + ".  Right click on " + username + "-credentials and click on 'Add To My Drive'." + nl);